My Manga

[fahrenheitx29]

Hi Guys here are the first 2 pages of my manga project. It's not perfect but I hope you like it.

[<<DoragonessU>>]

Wow, that's really good! (The text might be a bit small in some areas though.) Are you publishing it anywhere?

[SOO-DA]

Holy crap that's really good XDDDDDDDDDD
monotones!! how do you use monotones? I have absolutely no clue XDDDD


Do we read this from left to right, or right to left.
For me it makes sense both ways.. haha


For some reason I think the package is super suspicious ~___________________________~;;


Has the project got a name yet?
Look forward to more. XDD Keep them coming.

[fahrenheitx29]

Thanks you all for the compliments. I haven't thought of publishing it actually I'm just making it as a past time activity( But I'm hoping to publish it someday lol). and I didn't use any tones to make this (Because I don't know how to use it as well haha), I used this program called manga studio EX 4 its really handy and its easy to use. and the name of this project is DISC.

[SOO-DA]

Ooooh I see I see. I should get my hands on that.


Any ideas for plot? What genre is it?

[<<DoragonessU>>]

I've heard of that program before. Where did you get it, and how much did it cost? Is it easy to use?

Btw, I have some connections at Kiseki Manga, and they're always happy to find new Australian mangakas.

If you're interested, I can always introduce you to them.

[fahrenheitx29]

Sooda: If you're targetting a much younger readers better stick with fantasy and stuff or if you are targetting female readers better go with romantic love story genre but if you're targetting the blokes action adventure is the one to choose. It's up to you mate but if you need help I'll be more than happy to assist you.


DoragonesU: Wow!! I mean really O_o thats wow beyond my wildest dream. But I'm not really confident enought if I could meet their standards, but I really want to try it though haha. and I'm not sure if a can make them fast enough considering I have another job Y_Y.
Oh and about the manga studio It's easy to use, you can also purchase them here http://my.smithmicro.com/win/mangaex/index.html.

[VV]

Just wanna say great job on the hands man O_O Wish I could do hands T_T
Best of luck with the manga xD!

[<<DoragonessU>>]

DoragonesU: Wow!! I mean really O_o thats wow beyond my wildest dream. But I'm not really confident enought if I could meet their standards, but I really want to try it though haha. and I'm not sure if a can make them fast enough considering I have another job Y_Y.
Oh and about the manga studio It's easy to use, you can also purchase them here http://my.smithmicro.com/win/mangaex/index.html.

I've heard really great reviews on it, because it was directly translated from a Japanese program (unlike Anime Studio).

But yes, if you ever want to join Kiseki, I can always lend you a few good words. =]

What's your name, btw? And which club are you from?

[Sleet]

Hmm...that's pretty good. Must've spent alot of time on those hands :p

[fahrenheitx29]

Doragoness: Thanks DoragonessU I'll try finishing my first episode ASAP then well go from there if its OK with you ? My name is John I'm a citizen here in Australia but was born and raised somewhere in Southeast Asia and I don't belong in any club yet. I tried asking some members about it, they said that it's not worth joining because of my work schedules and most of your activities happens during the weekdays and in day-times as well T_T. And I really want to be in one  . By the way I sent you and Soo Da a private message  I was wondering if both of you received it?


Sleet: Hahahahah ssshhhhh how did you found out

[Sleet]

The hands seem to have the most detail :p

Oh btw, if you wanted some actual proper criticism:
Because the first panel of the first page is at an upward angle, you get no real sense of the space, so you have no frame for the movement & location of the character on the first page, so you don't really know there's a reception desk by page 2.

[fahrenheitx29]

The hands seem to have the most detail :p

Oh btw, if you wanted some actual proper criticism:
Because the first panel of the first page is at an upward angle, you get no real sense of the space, so you have no frame for the movement & location of the character on the first page, so you don't really know there's a reception desk by page 2.

Thanks for the proper criticism mate I really appreciate it .

I understand your point I didn't detailed on the reception desk location inside the building on purpose. Because it will take more time and panels just to emphasize the location of the reception desk. I just want the readers to focus on where the event is, the delivery boy and the box. if I finish the whole thing you will see that the reception desk is not really going to be a big impact on this scene.

[<<DoragonessU>>]

Doragoness: Thanks DoragonessU I'll try finishing my first episode ASAP then well go from there if its OK with you ? My name is John I'm a citizen here in Australia but was born and raised somewhere in Southeast Asia and I don't belong in any club yet. I tried asking some members about it, they said that it's not worth joining because of my work schedules and most of your activities happens during the weekdays and in day-times as well T_T. And I really want to be in one  . By the way I sent you and Soo Da a private message  I was wondering if both of you received it?

Yep. I got it just now. Thanks for that!

Maybe you could join one of AnimeUNSW's special events? They usually happen on weekends. The most recent one was our Gunpla MK-II and End of Session Dinner last week. Our next one will most likely be a group outing some time in November, after everyone's exams. Please come if you can! You can find out more information in AnimeUNSW's section of the forum.

[SOO-DA]

Sooda: If you're targetting a much younger readers better stick with fantasy and stuff or if you are targetting female readers better go with romantic love story genre but if you're targetting the blokes action adventure is the one to choose. It's up to you mate but if you need help I'll be more than happy to assist you.

Oh I meant in terms of your story.. if you had a plot already planned out. XDDDDD


Nah I'm not good with drawing stuff like that. I've never mastered the basics so I struggle with different poses, angles and facial expressions. Let alone I never dreamed of drawing backgrounds haha.

You can ask anyone but what I like drawing most are traps. I've created characters before all of which are women, tsundere and look like a men. If there be any kind of genre I would pick.. it would be shojo mindf*ck hahaha. Cause girls fall so many of the bishounen guys, I want to make a bishounen girl that could fall in love with and then go 'NOOOO what am I doing!'. Nyahahaha.

But other than headshots, I didn't get very far.