My manga: Just Criminals

[mizukiyanagi]

heya guys! this is a manga that Im working on at the moment. I'm redoing it so these pages are pretty much scrapped lol
But anyway, here's a few pages just to show you guys what I can do

Enjoy.....

READ RIGHT TO LEFT


JUST CRIMINALS




























weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......
if the images don't work, here's the links from devart

pg. 1:   http://mizukiyanagi.deviantart.com/art/Just-Criminals-Pg-1-146090200
pg.2:    http://mizukiyanagi.deviantart.com/art/Just-Criminals-Pg-2-146090340
pg.3:    http://mizukiyanagi.deviantart.com/art/Just-Criminals-pg-3-146090503
pg.4:   http://mizukiyanagi.deviantart.com/art/Just-Criminals-Page-4-146090695
pg.5 :  http://mizukiyanagi.deviantart.com/art/Just-Criminals-pg-5-146090808
pg.6-7:  http://mizukiyanagi.deviantart.com/art/Just-Criminals-double-page-6-7-146091020

[<<DoragonessU>>]

Good stuff! I enjoyed reading it. The framework was easy to follow and the art and toning were done pretty nicely as well.

Welcome to the forum, and I hope to see more of your work soon!

[Calisto]

wow that's pretty awesome!!!

u should make more different genres as well lol

[hazzar565]

You have skillz

Have you ever thought on submitting your work to Kiseki?

[mizukiyanagi]

That IS my submission to kiseki.
haha it didn;t get in though :\
but they said the story is interesting, the art just needs a little polishing since its messy

[SOO-DA]

OMG teeeeeeeeeeach me oh great one m(_ _)m

[fahrenheitx29]

Whoa dude this is awesome!!! I Love the bad ass style!

[mizukiyanagi]

oh my.
Thanks guys <333

[jeztronik]

mmmMm quite interesting i like how its all touchy on the hero ethics
what/who are youre influences for the character design?

[mizukiyanagi]

mmmMm quite interesting i like how its all touchy on the hero ethics
what/who are youre influences for the character design?

Oxymorons  I guess... lol.

or did you mean like the actual character image?... I just like hoodies ._____. and the him being in an all black suit could be a good joke starter and there are its advantages of being hard to be seen in the dark.

[jeztronik]

ahH naru hodo, and black is quite slimming

[Rei-chan]

Hahaha!!! This is awesome! I love the 'hero' in the manga!  

My fav. panel:
"Aheheheee.. I'm ssooo badass" HAHAHAA!! So cute! X3

I also like how you ended the chapter too! You added an awesome twist and showed the sly cunny-ness to the character. It's awesome!

(I wish it was on actual manga now.... Then I can buy it and read it on my bed)

[mizukiyanagi]

@jez: hahaha I suppose lol. I did draw him pretty skinny though rofl.

@Rei: Oh my, Im really touched ;_____; and haha that's one of my favourite panels as well xDD


I was actually thinking of doing this a webcomic instead lol since Im a little lazy with redoing everything haha. Im gonna see how I go. I might change my mind and go for Tokyopop (when I improve more with other things ) lol.

[muramasa91]

Whoaaaaa....stunning!
I-i'm speechless! No words can describe how many techniques had been used to create a manga of quality! Tell me, sensei, which course are you taking right now? I had a change in mind of my future plans!

[SPN]

Ahhhhhhh it's you! :3 <3  *waves* heeeey~ ^__^
I enjoyed reading this on the kiseki forums ;3 will you update more?