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« Reply #1 on: March 07, 2010, 12:22:43 AM » |
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which uni are you returning to might i ask? i really like your backgrounds btw. very detailed without drawing too much attention away from the figures (though when the scenery is so nice you do have to examine it a bit  )
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« Reply #2 on: March 07, 2010, 01:40:50 PM » |
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Well balanced and superb, I must say. But then again, the balance between character and Background must be maintained at all times. I realised that your characters do not really have dynamics although the posture and poses are fantastic. I would love to see more if possible, in the future.
You works are truly awesome. Keep it up, and yes, we should meet up to discuss about works!
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« Reply #3 on: March 07, 2010, 06:06:19 PM » |
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@Noless: Returning to UNSW ;3 @Muramasa91: mind you enlighten me on this matter of dynamics? :3 I hardly get criticism despite my asking for them so any would be truly appreciated .__. mmmm theres always my DA if you guys would like to see more :3 hahaha shameless plug http://sugarplumneko.deviantart.com
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« Reply #4 on: March 07, 2010, 09:50:05 PM » |
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@spn
You are a willing person to learn more ,and that makes me happy to tell you about it. For that, i'm increasing your spiral power. I will post one drawing which states a lot about dynamics
This one is extremely good. Look at how her leg goes. Gaussian blur makes it look as if the leg is twirling to a rapid clockwise direction. In other words, it makes a great art. Dust and impact too makes a great difference.
Your drawings could be poster-type illustrations, and i really liked it. You should start considering about doing commisions if you want to. We could meet up during dinner (thanks to freakking australian studies lecture which slows down my time to meet you guys during the session) and discuss more of styles, but i must admit, you are my senior, so I'm in no place to grade your work
After all, artwork is perfect in its own ways. Despite how they look, they will always be good[/i]
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« Reply #5 on: March 07, 2010, 10:23:17 PM » |
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I reckon those pictures are great already, especially the first and last one. There's nothing you need to do to improve it because it's awesome as it is. Maybe some weapons (swords) would make it much better. Your decision. Second one is a bit sketchy, but maybe that's your style. But if it was clean like your first one, it'd look really great. Your third one looks like a banner for an MMO... meaning that it looks great. Maybe you can make banners for certain companies and such.  Your last one is is great too. The technique you used, not sure if it's water-based paint-ish  is really good. It really makes the characters stand out. I think you can do a manga or CG based on your art. It'd look great as a manga. Honestly, I like your pictures compared to the one with impact. But hey, that's just my opinion.
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« Reply #6 on: March 07, 2010, 10:29:28 PM » |
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Your last one is is great too. The technique you used, not sure if it's water-based paint-ish  is really good. It really makes the characters stand out. I think you can do a manga or CG based on your art. It'd look great as a manga. Honestly, I like your pictures compared to the one with impact. But hey, that's just my opinion. Issa alright. I kinda liek the last one too. It's actually fitting to be a poster picture
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« Reply #7 on: March 07, 2010, 10:35:00 PM » |
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woooooooooooow sooo good ;-; lol no constructive comments here though. sorry ~
my favorite is the 2nd one actually xDDDD im a fan of sketchy drawings and what you did with the color tones.. (i dont know the name for it xD;; but it's in the hair/vest/pants) its probably personal preference, but i like it best when it's simple coloring
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« Reply #8 on: March 07, 2010, 11:11:03 PM » |
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@Muramasa91: lol what's this spiral power?  mmm but yeah I get what you mean :3 I've often realised how 'dead' my art looks; like the characters just exist there with no sense of movement or emotion .___. hmm but ye I'll see what I can do about that  Thanks! @Tukunz: Hahahah yeah I tried several styles in the pictures ;3 The second is supposed to be sketchy (but maybe I overdid it?) whilst the others i tried to keep clean :3 mmmm as for the MMO look-alike banner...I'm not surprised ahaha  It actually IS a banner for a MMO online game called Antaros Chronicles >w< I'm glad it portrayed that vibe to it~ lol funny you mentioned manga because the first pic and the last are of the same OCs which are in my manga called Hokori ;3 I'm really glad you could sense that too  ahahah @SOO-DA: aiya sorry I didn't know .___. ok I won't ask for anymore crit suma >3>;; mmm but yeah I also agree with you on the simplistic colouring method :3 I adore the style but I can never pull it off properly >_< hahah I find it harder than all the other colouring methods actually 
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« Reply #9 on: March 07, 2010, 11:32:06 PM » |
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i wouldnt say your characters lack emotion, you seem to have the brooding expression down very well, and you can almost feel the boredom of the guy on the left in the last picture
also your shadowing and colouring is superb
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« Reply #10 on: March 07, 2010, 11:49:38 PM » |
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oh sorry that was a figure of expression 'no constructive criticism here' as in.. from me cause i think you're drawing/CG skills are awesome already XDDDDD
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« Reply #11 on: March 08, 2010, 03:53:37 PM » |
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@Tukunz: Hahahah yeah I tried several styles in the pictures ;3 The second is supposed to be sketchy (but maybe I overdid it?) whilst the others i tried to keep clean :3 mmmm as for the MMO look-alike banner...I'm not surprised ahaha  It actually IS a banner for a MMO online game called Antaros Chronicles >w< I'm glad it portrayed that vibe to it~ lol funny you mentioned manga because the first pic and the last are of the same OCs which are in my manga called Hokori ;3 I'm really glad you could sense that too  ahahah I have good sense in stuff like this 
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« Reply #12 on: March 08, 2010, 07:26:56 PM » |
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Thanks for the kind comments guys :3 I feel rather inspired after that~  too bad uni pretty much eliminates any chance of me drawing for leisure .___. hurrr.... Well hopefully I can whip something up by week 3!
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« Reply #13 on: March 08, 2010, 09:56:43 PM » |
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I'm sure that you can do something, after listening to the vast majority of the forum groups
honestly, I don't know how your works generated so much comment over the past few days. I showed my dynamic works and no one likes it. It seems that everyone in the forums hate me.
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« Reply #14 on: March 08, 2010, 10:03:27 PM » |
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well, i think that the poses are already realistic and expressive, and they achieve this even though they depict stationary or predominantly stationary figures, they dont need to be "dynamic" as you put it, that would change the style of the picture completely or at least from your description "dynamic" is capturing some sort of rapid motion, correct me if you mean something else 
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